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RE: MAKE ME YOUR WORLD
Yes, thanks, nice to have you read it
I think why you feel it's off is because it lacked the rhymes like the other stanzas
Yes, thanks, nice to have you read it
I think why you feel it's off is because it lacked the rhymes like the other stanzas
most likely yes now as you say it lol the flow is different because of it ...