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RE: Pearlescent Poems # 56: Cherish Part 2 (Original Poem)
I finished it, whew, that was one action packed story!! It was so cool how you made one predator more ferocious than the next, I couldn't help but look forward to whatever new more terrifying creature you had in store! I've never heard of the first one before, so I learned something new...and then at the very end...Dick Roman! LOL!!!
Well done, you know how to make a fast paced action story, that is for sure. You know, right now I feel like watching one of those ocean documentaries, exploring the depths of the sea, which has always been a hugely fascinating topic to me, a whole alien world right within our own :)
LOL yeah, Dick Roman at the very end, but the more biblically descriptive behemoth of the Leviathan in all it's terrifying and gruesome proportions and ferocity. I'm glad you enjoyed the action scenes, the whole world underwater became so vivid to me, and I did proper research to add to the depth of the details as well as my own limited experiences in the ocean and such. I am so appreciative that you read the entire story in one sitting. If I ever make a sequel to it, I will definitely let you know. But yes, ocean documentaries are hard to ignore, what's beneath us is truly fascinating! Thanks again my friend. It means a lot
Just as you reading my book means a huge deal to me. But it certainly was no chore!! I wouldn't have read it straight through if I wasn't thoroughly enjoying it ;) Also, the next chapter is up...experimenting with the art of leaving cliffhangers at the ends of chapters. It's been a challenge since the way I had the chapters for the entire book set up was completely different :)
I don't mind cliffhangers at all. It gives me something more to ponder on, but just makes the wait for the next chapter more suspenseful. I can dig it, do what is best. I'm with you every step of the way as you reveal each chapter :) And so glad to hear my novel wasn't a chore. It was aimed for a proud audience but mainly keeping in mind my lil brother Jacob who wanted action, action and more action so I delivered lol