The Naked Truth
You lie to me while we sleep in the embrace of destiny, my eyes are wandering in the jungle of incredible wisdom. Freedom reveals new stories of sages through primordial scripts, I miss simple math for understanding good and bad in people.
New wisdom covers old lies in the clouds of truth, does not understand the essence of matter as I pass through the fountains of gentle words. Open me the gates of time to find the lost man, you are a girl from my dreams who follow me through every tear and smile.
The new destination changes the goal and the decisions while enthusiasts surf on the clouds of inspiration, start the winner and champion in the depths of the heart and soul. The biggest hits come with the biggest failures, courage seeks happiness in a lost city of love adventures.
Princess in the hands of honour, beauty in the restless waters of the ocean that goes through the wonderful dimensions of passion. A moral doctrine in the eyes of a star makes new plans for luxury art, I love you from the heart.
- Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Es muy dificil saber cual es el bueno y cual es el malo.
Debemos seguir en este mar de informacion, surfeando en las olas de la comunicacion.
te deseo Exito, amigo.
Nos vemos en la cima.
It is very difficult to know which is good and which is bad.
We must continue in this sea of information, surfing in the waves of communication.
te desire Success, friend.
See you at the top.
See you on the top
Carpe Diem
Great poem. Perhaps the new concept of bulleting each stanza doesn't make it poetic. Or joining the lines together.
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Nice writing :) @dobartim
Thank you
Sir, I'll always see you write poem, where you get the rhyme writing daily @dobartim
This is not rhyme
Nice writing friend
Thank you
I am amazed by how the love is expressed here.
Thanks for the poetry
I am glad you like it
Thank you