The Idiot of Love - A Poem
I have neglected myself
Since I started to love you.
Because my world,
and my heart revolves around you.
I find it difficult
Because you love us both.
You will not hear
any complaint from my lips.
Because of love, I learned to endure.
Because of love, I gave it completely.
My heart is not hoping
anymore for love returned.
Because of love I gave in to your whims.
Because of love,
my heart is crying now.
Good friends, I will not listen to all your advice.
I shall follow my heart...
Because I love her completely.
"I came to rise as wounded dolphin."
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Hey, thanks a lot! I am not posting poems usually but sometimes
they spark out of my mind.
So bittersweet. I really like it!
Thank you!
nice poem my friend, but i guess heart is a male not a female so
it should be like that because i love him completely and you are looking discouraged to me my friend especially with these words.
i think we should never leave the hand of hope because hope is the start of every success.
You have a good eye, my friend. I meant the narrator as part of a love triangle or something like that...
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Thanks, I will drop by soon!
What a splendid poem sir it's brialliant
Outstanding post and narrative. Thank you for sharing!
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Nice one buddy liked it
Love is pizza and you have a good appetite @darthnava
Nothing else matters.
This poem reminds of the song Saving All My Love for You. Ha ha