Together Bears
Together Bears
For Luke, on our 12th anniversary
You’d never have believed you’d be eating onions
as part of almost every meal.
If your 19 year-old self saw you drinking coffee
he would totally ask, what’s the deal?
If I’d told you that curries would be your top choice
you’d have told me my brain was misplaced.
And if I’d said, you’ll be vegan one day,
you’d surely have laughed in my face.
But what could I see, twelve years in the future,
and why would it matter at all?
When the one thing I knew is that we’d be together
holding hands through each rise and each fall.
Through triumphs like defending your thesis,
while so poor we shared one pair of shoes.
For better or worse, it's a beautiful curse
to know I'll be right here with you.
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Congratulations Bear <3 precious to look back over the journey!
Not one for romantic or soppy stuff, but this is how it should be done. The kind of romantic only seen with long-term relationships and many years of struggling together. Congrats and happy 12 years of getting into each other's hairs! May there be many, many more.
Thanks Anike!
Congratulations and more many many more years to come...
I've been myself in a long term relationship and it is funny to see how we have shifted and changed together...
If I told him he would use a flashlight not to tread on rolypolies and slugs on the garden XD at night, or rescue bees... or like ginger LOL hahah
People change us and we change them... and still we remain the same :)
Hmm onions in almost every meal sounds good
Lots of happiness to you both!
Thank you. Yeah, it's amazing how we influence each other's live so much. I just hope it's been for the positive lol.
He likes ginger... that's positive... hahah
We often joke that we don't even have to finish each other's sentence... though for me enduring love is the most romantic...
Congratulations! Much love to you both and I wish you many more happy years to come
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Congratulations! Wishing you many more happy years together.
Oh Bear this is so sweet!! I really hope he loved this <3
Congrats to both of you. Big milestone. May there be many more ahead!
Thanks, Bex!
Congrats to both of
You. Big milestone. May there be
Many more ahead!
- bex-dk
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The line about the onions really resonated with me.
I remember someone cooking a spaghetti dish, and I asked innocently, "what's in the sauce?" and it was simply one ginormous enormous bowl of onions.
I could not believe it. This predatory vegetable, which savagely attacks the eyes of anyone who comes near it, was sneaking it's way into my meal.
The line "For better or worse, it's a beautiful curse" is like a poem within a poem. It's so strong, it stands on it's own. :)
Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.
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