Hi Bye-Bye
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Hi, she said- I said hi..hi
I ran to my desk
At the same spot
In blankness
Hi! She said- I said hi..
Bye-bye...
Dumb head numb lips
Dumb..dumb I!
OK, here’s another chance
How about one dance
In her eyes the glance!
But I say hi again...
Like I said bye...
Bye-bye.
"Hi Bye-Bye"
by
@CreativeChaos
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I felt elements of excitement, humility and a sadness for failure to interpret approval by others, resulting in frustration in this poem. I think it transmits a lot of emotion for the words you've written. Nicely done!
That's the beauty of poetry; conveying a lot of thoughts and emotions in a nutshell. Thank you @free-reign for your kind words, really appreciate it!