For something that is spontaneous and an art that was expressed just based on the reflection of your relationship, it feels like a very fully realized piece, which I think speaks to the power of your love - now I'm sounding hokey and corney.

But hear me out, a lot of these rhyme patters, some of the more fluid rhythms, the expression of raw emotional connection and the way you compare that love with the hardships that exist without, you've created a piece that showcases the best of what love can bring - a light from the night and shade from the day metaphor.

I really enjoyed this read @japhofin8or, and if there ever is a time to be corney, surely it is this day!

All the best to you both! and thank you for the share, good sir.