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RE: Poetry #7: Sojourn on Saudade Ridge

in #poetry7 years ago

this poem, wholly different both in tone and, of course, structure from Dakota Docks, reads like viewing your photograph.

A snapshot, a capturing of all the composes a moment.

Again, what I most enjoyed was the added perspective you built into the end of the poem - the narrator's conscious awareness and acknowledgement of the passing of time, the migration of life.

So much in so little, you have a deft touch at saying the most you can through choice words, @horzymandias. Makes for a great read.

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Most of the time, but not always, I see a poem as a challenge to compact as much meaning in as little a space as possible. It helps to have an accompanying photo that may keep people on the path with which I want them to specifically interpret my words with.

Also, many thanks for both of your in-depth, quality comments! I apologize for the lateness with which I get this to you.

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