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RE: Steemit Vision Quest Week #3 – “Angels Among Us” (Unofficial) Poetic Expression

in #poetry7 years ago

This poetry feels so relatable, as I connect with the subtle sadness you're sharing here. It feels like a light kind of sadness, like a curious sadness, as if to say that you are remembering or wondering about a time and space where you live(d) as the angels live(d). Feels like you're longing for that heaven here on earth, and wondering where it is, and why it feels hidden, and who is with you, and what is keeping you from being there. And then maybe you're sensing little pieces of that paradise as the words strike a chord and resonate on your heartstrings, and my heartstrings, and all heartstrings.

We hum with the wind and time stands still.

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Thank you @cabelindsay for taking the time to really read my compilation poem and connect with it. All that you have said is correct. However I am years removed from the searching and longings over the years. I am at a place now where I have a lot more clarity. Thank you for your comments and you will be receiving my favorites from week two by email tomorrow.

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