Unquiet Ragas

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

surf cosmic
compression of moments
untethered, fall

through planar, realized
metamorph esse
light in the transduce
forking ray

unquiet ragas
simulate chaos
ants at meridian
attain human facade

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simply amazing! i had to re-read it again and again to grasp the entire beauty of this work of art. i love the 'compression of moments' line; it reveals so much truth about life and puts time, a concept which we think we comprehend entirely, into a brand new perspective. there genuinely isn't a perfect word to describe this poem, one must simply feel and experience it. that's all. ever person that reads this should simply surrender to its depths and simplified complexity and let it abduct them. thank you.

this really means a lot, thank you! appreciate your honesty and feedback. 🌈

you are welcome! keep up the good work! i'd love to read more :)

I'm inspired by your use of space, and purposefulness. Each word seems to play a role in the abstract progression of the piece. Looking forward to reading more in the future!

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