I love the nature personification. You use it perfectly to express the fear and desire for that one person to be involved. I can completely relate. But I also found out through experience, that if the ashes dont mingle, its still not the end. Like everything it has cycles. The winters cold will begin to warm and rebirth is evident all around. Its through these experiences our soul grows. Thank you for the wonderful words
Thank you for your insightful response - a poem is only the beginning - it continues on inside a reader and hopefully evokes a mature response such as yours
It does. I couldn't agree more. It's even more powerful she relatable. Then overpowering when it's something you feel like you are experiencing. So again thank you for sharing your insight. It has had an impact
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you're very welcome!