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Love love love the cyclic nature of this poem. you claimed it rudimentary but this is gold!
This reminds me a lot of singing circle songs with my mama in the garden as a kid, beautiful rhythm and imagery with this. share more!

Thank you! This kind of encouragement will help me to continue to write.

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