DAYDREAMS / A Journal of Fiction #29
DAYDREAMS is a journal of my thoughts, the fiction that colors my mind. Each post is a thought of its own. They are not meant to connect; although, at times there are common themes.
Episode Twenty Nine
We accept that her tear is an offering,
a framework supporting redemption,
a delicate string transposing
the notes in a chord
or some random memory
she hears in blue velvet
while something quite bolder
is dressed up in sequins.
We follow its path down her cheek,
a river that tip-toes on crystals
and lands on the altar.
Some think its a trail,
a meandering walk
that is broken,
a limp left alone
and the sound of it dragging.
Others see sadness,
a lake filled with salt
on a day when the wind
blows over light without stopping
or offering prayers.
I am uncertain and ask if her sorrow
defines a new joy,
like something
that somebody gives as a gift,
or a moment when all is forgotten
except how the sun falls warm
on a shoulder.
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beginningtoend you poetry is very great and one all content of text excellent
Thanks, have a good day.
Powerful poem.
Many thanks, have a great Brooklyn day.
Lady fate is knocking on my door
Even though my muscles are sore
I still raise myself to be a gracious host
I remember that even in my best moments she still never for me raised a toast.
All I can do is offer her what meager I do have
I will now do my part and let her leave
No point in now taking from her
When the unkind father time has left within me no desire
It always pays to be nice to fate.
Really great poem my friend and it hits from the beginning with these words :" we accept that her tear is an offering, a framework supporting redemption, a delicate string transposing the notes in a chord.. "
What a beautiful and strong words...which are impressive..
Thank you for sharing and have a nice day my friend...
Thank you my friend, I hope it’s a great day in turkey.
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Thanks.
This part of your day dreaming is catching and I want to catch up with you on this one.
If I may ask what do you mean by that? Am curious to know. Am following up from the very beginning to end. @beginningtoend. Good work
The path of her tear (salty tear) like a river of crystals.
That's cool. What about
You are the best
this poem is the best.
indeed at the summit, my friend. do you think to write a book one day?
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