Good day to all my #steemados, as I commented in my introductory post, I arrived here because I usually dream about things a little particular and I would like to learn how to turn those dreams into stories.
Today I want to share an excerpt from one of my dreams that I will talk about later.
I was not sure about publishing it because it can be a bit gloomy, but I share it for entertainment purposes.
I hope you enjoy it.
And then I saw how everything went dark...
To make way for the flames,
they were not red or orange, they were a dead gray, opaque and they came for me
I could not hear anything
more than my thoughts. I felt like my skin was incinerated,
it was cracking and black bubbles
they began to sprout becoming
in putrefying sores.
I did not have a voice,
I could not hear anything,
I can't ask for help, I could only
writhe in my agony.
I could almost feel how my bones melted with my flesh,
I could see my blood evaporate and mix with the air.
I do not know why I did not die or because he was still conscious.
I listened to a only bang,
that's when I started listening
heartrending screams everywhere, desperate,
full of regrets and suddenly I realized
that he was not agonizing in gray flames.
I was agonized in souls, tormented souls.
My chest began to sink, the burst
It was produced by my lungs, my ribs
They broke and I began to fall, and fall ...
I began to see the souls more and more far ,
listen as they shouted.
"a sinner".
I could only see how my feet and my hands
they began to turn to ashes
that mixed with the air as I fell.
I became one with the eternal emptiness.
Until my remains fell on a mountain of
white feathers, I took a deep breath and felt
a peace outside of my world around me,
and then I understood.
They have cleansed my being of sins and it is time to be reborn
in that moment ... I fainted.
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Wow, really thank you very much. I try to learn to write better stories.
If at least only person like it, it's enough for me. <3
excellent information very good job
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