through my eyes
I am just a breeze.
...just a breeze.
Gently stirring at the window,
of your soul.
A sound on the edge of perception.
A rustle in the leaves,
of branches lit by a starry sky.
Barely self-aware, and already gone…
Written 03/01/2008
© 2008 Mirror aka @as-i-see-it (All rights reserved)
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I love your poem. You should enter poem challenge every Friday if you don't already.
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Poem challenge? I don't know about it. I'm new here, but I'm not really into anything that's competitive. I like things where EVERYBODY wins. :-)
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Really good poem :)
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