Occult Culture (Spoken word poem with video)
Hey again. :)
I just uploaded another video, this one I'm both excited and nervous about. Heh.
My first spoken word poetry video!
Please be gentle! Lol.. Just kidding, I want the truth..
If it's bad, I wanna know so I can work on it and become better.
I'm not a singer, I don't rap, or anything like that.. But I've been wanting to bring more life to my poems for a long time..
And.. I figured I might as well just try spoken word, which is something I enjoy a lot and something I watch on YouTube somewhat often.
I don't think you need music to make some decent vocal artwork of such nature, though.. I did add some music as well because I thought it made it better.
Thanks to @qrittix for the music! He made a dope song that was totally the kind of vibe I was looking for for this poem.
Thanks for checking it out if you do! And I of course would very much welcome any feedback if you have any to offer, especially as this is new territory for me!
Link to the video will be below.
Wow deep thoughts! At a loss for words.
Thanks for the feedback! That's a great response for a first attempt at spoken word. :) That made me smile. I appreciate it.
I like the style really much! Love how you speak the truth here. Majority of people are brainwashed and have no idea they are being fucked by the government. Too bad that most likely the masses will never realize how much brainwashed they actually are. Makes you wanna be a different species :)
Word. :) Glad to hear. And I agree.. It is too bad, makes you wonder what things would be like and how much better it would be if the masses did care! But yeah.. Heh. Sometimes I wouldn't mind being like an alien or some other kind of species. Cheers trendo, thanks for the thoughtful response!
I guess we can only imagine what the world would be if everyone knew the truth and brainwashing wasn't a thing!
Who says you cannot sing, your voice is good and can be improved with proper training. I will want to hear more of you.
Aw. That was nice of you to say. Thanks man. I was going to send you that steem the other night, but I've never sent steem to anyone before so I gotta learn how to do it.. When I figure it out I'll send some steem your way.
just enter my username in to box and just enter the amount and then put your master key and you are done.
Made it into about 3:32 on video, I enjoyed it to that point, but then, well, I have a language barrier I guess, can only take so much off-colored language. That being said, I think you did a nice job on the imagery and the background sound for the part I did listen to.
Thanks for the feedback! I'm guessing by off colored language you mean cursing? Yeah.. I try to keep it at a minimum.. But I still tend to use the f word pretty often. I'm working on it, and sometimes I think it's necessary to get the point across, but will consider that in the future and make an attempt to consider those who are extra against curse words.
Glad to hear you enjoyed it outside of that! Cheers.
Happy-slightly belated birthday. Hope you enjoyed it. I tried to be nice in the post, yeah, cursing sometimes gets to me if overdone.
i like your post my friend
Illuminati isn't something to just joke about.
They live, we sleep. Our whole reality is just made up by the elite.
Amazing work I really enjoyed this.
Indeed! I don't think you were implying that I was just joking about the Illuminati, but just to be clear, I am very serious about the subject. The Illuminati is a very real historical group. And who knows if they are still around or which secret society is at the top of the pyramid so to speak.. But.. I do think secrecy and secret societies are something we should be concerned about, and I think they have a significant influence on government and politics and the way things work in the world.
Thanks for appreciating and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
@apolymask,
Commenting while listening...
#1. Music beat - Perfect!
#2. Voice - if you add little electric mix up it might make more attractive
#3. Voice - make it little speed
#4. Lyrics - Perfect
Overall this is great! And you can have a great future ahead! Thanks for sharing and really appreciate your effort!
Cheers~
@apolymask - Sire, love this beautiful rhyme. you did an impressive work Sire.
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bring the 'Reggie Style'. nice work & nice video @apolymask
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Really Good Post
thank you for sharing
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