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RE: Pearlescent Poems # 5: Mahogany Monsoon
Beautiful. Such a powerful tone held in this piece. Mother nature's fury is no match for anything we maintain. I liked the internal rhymes towards the end of the poem a lot, added an almost whimsical feel. Great work!
Thank you once again for chiming in your thoughts @alchemage it's always nice to hear back from a fellow poet who inspires many as well. I am glad you enjoyed this one. It was a bit tough to write this today, especially imagining all of the horrifying things that such destruction entails but everything has a purpose and this was just a small reminding gesture to cherish life using a very direct method. Appreciate you.