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RE: ...there's nothing like darkness [an original poem]
"fuck, these roadmaps to peace
the first thing we need is a heart"
Amen.
Beautiful poem! The flow was superb with a great selection for word choice. Imagery was a little sparse but the idea of darkness may have suppressed a lot of the imagery for myself, which is not necessarily a bad thing since it was the tone of the poem. I really enjoyed your writing. The topic was well covered and well delivered.
The last verse was my favorite. I love that you share the balance of light and dark as necessary.
Thank you for taking the time to share this with our community. :)