Beautiful photograph with a beautiful poem.
Face in face to face we sit together close
This line reminds me of a DMT trip I had, very interesting use of imagery.
Release muscles and lie back into grass
Ants crawl endlessly into holes in the skin
I really like your use of imagery and the way you paint your words.
The flow was a little choppy, but I felt it added to the poem rather than detracted.
Thank you for sharing!
And thank you for your reply. This was written recalling a experience that happened in a blur of excitement.
Also, on the feedback on the choppiness is taken with gratitude! It was not intended, but I'm glad it is appreciated :D