Horrors of his Mind - Alpha and Omega ↖ ↗
tides of torment enclosing him
secluded by his own aversion
his cursed soul
executed without option
his solitary spirit
inhabited, but true and ever strong
insists of him-
'' what have I done, so wrong?''
''do not you see?'' - resonated a voice
his broken shell
''behold the rapture- I deliver, the malice I dispel''
his soul fluctuated at the thought.
an exposed pretender
revealed in the light
where mask of deception faded
into the darkest of the night
the spirit whispered low until all it could see
was the vibration of a light
beyond the misery.
''why hide behind the dim''- it taunted
without doubt
an echo
“cannot you see the glee the mask brings about?''
predominant in that coercion was not his true intention
the mask- ageless wins.
it's dominion, its intervention.
secluded soul singing it's sorrowful plea
''the mask is your reaper, why cannot you see''
misconceptions in the dark
of a deceived and dreary heart.
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Magnificent piece. I love the cadence and flow, and the message held within. :)
Thanks my dear its a spooky one !!
good postt
upvote.
thank you SO much 💜
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dark, bold and mysterious poem!
Thank You !!!! I am happy you have appreciated it and noticed the mystery :)
2 or 5 lines is crucial to me when I'm reading a poem. You have to struck me in my core or else I'll pass it like it was a mere statue in front me. I've read a lot of poems that has a potential but short of using the right symbols or whatever they want to convey to his/her reader... You have that quality...
Thank you my dear :] I am glad you have seen all the symbols ... there are many who read and pass by ... & dont understand meanings... maybe find too confusing ?!? ... but I enjoy writing this way . It opens many possibilities to different people !!! I appreciate that you read so many!!!
I will read more despite my busy schedule... Ber month is coming...
Phew... feels... don't know the right words... thinking of "Vandyke Brown"... while I notice, that you chose the matching picture perfectly already!
When are we going to hear this?
I adore that sepia coloring!!... that antique look!..can't stop using it :]
Ohh I am so so excited for it.. but I want to be as perfect as I can make it... it may even take a week.. I hope not more.. and I hope I will sound acceptable !!!
Already trying to imagine your voice :-)
I really hope I suits my writing well.. haha :]
Oh, it so does!! Are you planing to post on DTube? I posted my first video just now... in case you'd like to see me painting ;-)
Yes, I would like to make a channel, so I can cross promote :]
Absolutely!!!... what is the link:)
I can't wait to see your channel, hope you are working on it now!!
OK... short break then, and with your permission: https://dtube.video/v/reinhard-schmid/xmwgzc5g
I had to watch twice. Finally I get to see just how big that scale looks in reality!!!
A glimpse of a master working with his craft!
& I was not familiar with this DTube, keep me updated when posting new ones too!!!
Oh, this is a very Dark one. I turned off all the lights and lit a candle the second and third readings. I must say my senses were heightened when I did this and your words sent chills throughout my body. You seem to be taking it up a level everytime you write which amazes me in the short time I've been following you...
I hope it wasnt too spooky :] it endes up sounding like a horror !!!!!
No, not a Horror...
Just Suspenseful and Dark.
Looking forward to your future projects!
that's good , I didn't want to give you the spooks :]
Did you see steemit has it's own version of a' youtube' now.... obviously better... more freedom !
it's called DTube ! ... Opens up a world of possibilities
It's been running 8 days already! <<< the creator speaks about it in that link, lol
more ways to build SBD <3
No, I had no idea about DTube! Thank You @aineyann
I will check into this! Will you be posting videos on this Dtube?
It would be cool to hear you read your Wonderful poems in your Irish voice!:)
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Darkly moving and true
Hey lovely lady :)
Thanks for stopping by!!!.. I love to see you here xx
That's a neat story telling poem :D
thanks, i appreciate you popping by to check it out :]