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RE: Day 1 - Message in a bottle

in #poetry7 years ago

I like the way you repeated Message in a Bottle. It made it stand out in my mind as something concrete. So that way at the end when we find out the story is a message in a bottle it was already in my mind. Great job. Also I like the humor in this poem.

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Thanks. Appreciate it. With a beginning and end already revealed, it's the journey that counts.

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