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RE: Ole Tainted Blues ( 100 Days of Poetry) {Day #70}
He wished
he had spent his time more wisely.
Building things that would last,
Something he could pass to his children.
He couldn't give them his job in a will.
And they wouldn't want it.
This is really a heavy one! It is very rare to find poems like this, a poem that makes you contemplate about life. One thing I'm sure of, I wouldn't want to end up like this old man, so better spend my time wisely :)
Hi:) Yes exactly what I wanted the reader to contemplate. And instead of living out this story, just learning from it and consciously creating a favorable future.