Peotic-surge peotry Contest #1 (Emptiness)
*EMPTINESS *
Can a man live without a soul
Then why can't I find mine
I wish I could be whole.
For I think I am empty.
What link does past have with present
That my future looks so haunted
Go away! my pretence
For you suck me empty.
Can I sail through this life
That has beaten me so down
I wish I could just rise
For my joy is empty.
I ate my cake and can't have it
Now a slave to the system
O! a wretched man I am
I wish I could turn the hand of time.
by @essel
Poem well constructed, I love the verse''You suck me empty' 'it has taught me trail cautiously in order not to let life suck me dry... good bro
Thank you @johnsonkoranteng
Beautiful lines to share..thanks for this bro
Thanks @mcsamm
This poetry is on point. Bravo. @essel.
thanks @emmanuelacheamp
Nice work keep it up,,, stick around with the poetry-surge,,,, lets make a difference together... I hope to see you aroind,,, the winners will be announced today
thanks very much @tony-duke