Poetic-surge Poetry Contest #1 (Ravine of Despair)
Most hopeless and amateur poets like me are unnoticed but somewhat we wanted to be heard. So I thank @tony-duke and @ajremy for inspiring us to write something up in your Poetic-surge Poetry Contest. It’ll serve as our training ground in pursuing our area of focus. Thank you so much. Here’s my entry and I hope you’ll like it. Godspeed! 💕 #poetic-surgecontest #poetic-surge
“Ravine of Despair”
An absence of hope, being profound,
Perseverance that took abound,
So much for the unrecognized effort,
Ignoring a person’s worth.
Pouring emotions in that certain piece,
Taking it all out and feeling at ease,
Heart felt words that would make you cry,
In a solemn place, a tear fall in her eye.
Emptiness felt from deep within,
Finding something that’s similar to him,
Falling from that ravine of despair,
Trying to escape but seeks nowhere.
It’s an original composition made by me and to those who’s reading my stuffs, thank you really. 😘❤️
PS. I don’t own the pic that was uploaded. Credits to the owner. 😊
LR oi hahaha.. keep the pain flow in to generate more feels on your great writings, it's a great motivator. pugsa para maghilak nakag dugo 😂 hihi.. it's a very nice work tho! 😁
Thank you sa #support. 😊
This is really nice,,,, you did well,,, do not be discouraged,, we are all going to grow together step by step... Hope to see you around, the results will be announced today..
Hi! Thank you for the words of encouragement and yeah, our voice will be heard, maybe not now but one day it will. Thank you for taking time reading this. Means a lot. 😊