Elements of Success

in #poem6 years ago

I'm not that artistic. I can't even make a long poem but I wrote this and post this because I don't want to give up on my dreams and I don't want others to give up on theirs. So yeah a really short poem for you guys.



"Stand strong like a tree
Be in peace like the sea
Hope like a sunrise
Fly high like those butterflies"

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Really sweet poem ♡
For a tree is rooted deep within the ground,
The sea is still with no peak of sound,
Sun like the phoenix briging a new day,
Butterflies bringing people to play

Thanks, it would be better if you wrote this. I love yours.

No definitely not! Your poem is your own and you should be proud. It was yours that gave me inspiration to write mine as a reply, keep writing ♡

Great work @vlaaad keep going and I hope you keep moving towards achieving your dreams. Remember any kind of forward movement is still progress.
Regards @run.vince.run

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Welcome to steemit @vlaaad!

I just came across your message in the
steem chat, I don't look at the chat to
often and when I did I found your
sweet poem!

You write very nicely :-)

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