Its so refreshing to see someone write something a little darker that isn't just about being depressed or alone, im not trying to say certain feeling are not valid or people shouldn't write certain things, I am saying its great to see someone write something dark about unnatural forces or evil things, this kind of poetry is hard to find! I liked it, trying the same style myself, good job!!
I'm glad you liked it. Actually, I might have some poem on the same style coming up.