Information Finding Championship - Season 1 : Round 21 entry : THE GOOD INFIDEL.

in #poem7 years ago


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Oh God! Not again!
Treating himself with disdain
Just moments after the fun-game
Faced with moments of truthfulness
Consumed by guilt and numbness
Wondering how it happened again

What have I done?
The end feeling is not same as the real one
As he thought hard to see the gain
If this is the game,
then it’s a shame


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Confused, tensed and down
After- lust torment grips him tightly
Troubled by losing the real one badly
Thoughts of regrets flowing sadly
Tears of betrayal streaming

I’m sorry please! I wont let you down again
He whispers to himself
But only his good side hears him
Right here and now is the end
He resolves to be strong when it calls again.

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Very nice poetry, and poem. Lots of meanings for people to read.

thank you very much.

Thanks @kenneth1
I feel every word written in this poem
You write well..
Lovely piece

I am glad you like it.

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@kenneth1 you are an awesome poet! Good luck in this round!

Thanks dear friend. 😊

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Great entry @kenneth1! I have little knowledge of poetry, but I enjoyed reading this one! Good luck in the @ifc!

thank you man!

Great poem! I'm not sure this round is for me!

thanks. Lol! you can make any round yours you know? You've got the needed creativity

Thanks, but I've never been fond of poems! They never really spoke to me in the same way as other art forms...

Lol! I feel if one has these, then you can come up with poems... I may be wrong though.
Sensitive
emotional
okay with words
switch or assume personalities.
deep/hard thinker

Nope, I don't find beauty in words... Music on the other hand!

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