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RE: The Consumer of Stars- Pivotal Poetry- Soliloquy Sunday!

in #poem7 years ago

There is an internal rhyme in your poem, and it's rhythmic, however the short paced verses makes it very easy to feel the emotions retching, I love your end rhymes too, this is beautiful

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