About Last Night
From nowhere, a stranger visited last night
With the still darkness, puffs of white smoke visible
Chills, falls and tremble drifts down the spine
Unusual happening, about last night
Draped in black linen, my blanket was nowhere
A scene sore rare, on me could see
The trees and roof was gone, sky’s my cover
Purity about Last night
Just a few months ago
You took our very best
The gap left with big shoes to fit
What a wreck you left, about last night
But now you come back, peace I beg
Ground most fresh, arrogance in your face
Whisper to me not, a traitor you are
Alone you float, about last night
And like a healing wound on scar
My heart still bleeds alone
A distance ran, is all you scare me to
The days to come, about last night
You drop your snow flakes
You expect a gentle touch?
The season is mine
About last night wait for yours
Very heart touching
Thanks @anikaa for your time and honest complement.
Just beautiful... Very touching...i would like to try to write something like this but seems very difficult
Thanks @drgomez89 for checking it out. It's not hard, there is always a starting point. This is a real life story when you lose someone close to you!
Present one more night
I will soon @leon323 :)
I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing! 🖤
You ate welcome @arosebunch!
🙏🏼🖤
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Thank you for sharing!