After All I've Thought It Over - A Poem by Another Poet

in #poem7 years ago (edited)

There's another world that’s buried in time hidden in rhymes invisible before our very own eyes...

To our surprise things that we thought we realized were masked in a certain disguise and if we don’t wake up soon it may just beckon the final breath of our demise.

So many cant see it smell it or taste it yet still imprisoned in their very own minds.

Now ask yourself is there somewhere deep down that’s just wishin and hoping for more.

And if that’s the case there may be a way to prove it conceptual control with a bit of problem reaction solution.

History flpped upside down re-delivered to brainwashed masses spoon-fed.

An we're still not at the end got a few more twists and bends trials and tribulations no time to wait in limbo or in suspense refuse to lose and no way the darkness omnipotent..

So common sense says overcome the hate I've had enough lets play the odds and light it up.

After all...
I've thought it over...
And I'm not at the end.

Author's Notes

This is a short verse I wrote and performed as part of a song in a small solo project. I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings about this verse so if you liked it or didn't like it, I'd love to hear your opinion either way!

Thanks,
Another Poet

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