Very nice and unique style... I like what you did hear, a poem/short story combo!.. & not an easy thing to pull off, especially whilst still keeping the readers attention on the narrative!... Love the idea, and from a fellow poet, of course I have to follow and watch out for this extraordinary style!...
& I am also pondering the meaning behind the travelers purpose..but I do believe that it has a sad tone... maybe the loss of a loved one!
Maybe you will continue on this series !:]