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RE: The Legend of the beautiful girl from Pizzino - discovering another abandoned village in Italy 🇮🇹
Wow!
Pizzino looks exciting but the story almost broke my heart .
It is interesting to note that Lucia failed to care for herself because we was obsessed with waiting for Enrico, only for Enrico to pass by and not recognize her due to her emaciated look.
(sighs)
Do you mind if I use that to develop a story? My heart connects with it and I feel a plot budding inside of me.
Nice pictures by the way. Do enjoy your adventure.
Blessings
Hello @iamthegray ,
yes, exactly - that was the dramatic point where I felt the pain of love slowly sinking into my spine. Please take the story and develop it. I would love to read what you're making out of it. It is this mixture of fairytale and at the same time closeness to something we can experience today that grabbed me.
I'm excited to read what your heart pumps into your veins and makes you write!
Best
Elena 🌷
Hiya
I've written the story: although I kinda changed some things.
https://steemit.com/story/@iamthegray/staying-at-the-castle-original-horror-story
Let me know what you think of it
Blessings