Hey man I really like this. Don't forget to include tags for topics relevant to your post. As you can see only @partiko is tagged. As your post relates to poetry, you could include 'art' or 'poetry' as a tag, probably both.

Tagging allows people to search for your content.
Popular tags are: blog, steem, steemit, photography, art, music, life ... etc.

This will increase your visibility.

Why don't you make an 'introducing myself' post and tag 'introduceyourself' tag. That's what a lot of new users do first, as people often search that tag.

I hope this helps man, great work so far

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