OpenMic Songwriters Challenge Week 2: "Lost and found" original music splitscreen cello multitracking by @senzenfrenz

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

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This is my entry for the openmic songwriters challenge!

I had some hard time doing it, as you may see on the picture at the bottom:)
I hope you will enjoy it yet:)

Hier kommt mein Beitrag zur Songwriting Challenge für diese Woche!

Es ist mir etwas schwer gefallen, wie ihr auf dem Bild unten sehen könnt:)
Ich hoffe ihr mögt es dennoch:)

Lyrics/Text:

1

I declare new era's dawning
feeling that their time has gone (Gm)
We we'll claim and be recalling
all these lost and broken one's (Gm)

2

Quiet voice, give it a listen,
might get fixed your broken shield
our warriours of wisdom
fight the lies of dark lands dreams. (D)

Chorus

Sunk into the ground we were lost and found
like a ship that sailed far across the ocean
claiming to be free floating river stream
hunting high and low for a vast emotion (dD,Es)

3

From the east and from the west
they will come and join the forces (D)
time to give your very best
with your heart and your recoures → Übergang auf D mit Verzerrung Cello 2)

Chorus

Cello Solo

4

Come and join the revolution
make the world a better place
that's the time don't make excuses
stand the fear that you might face! (G)

Chorus

For a vast emotion...

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I think you're playing us and have a twin brother. I REALLY liked the solo. Get your third twin in there to harmonize. The blister finger is appropriate evidence.

Haha:) Thank you for that idea;)

I love it man

Thank you very much for your comment!

Supercool😃👍 Das war bestimmt nicht einfach es aufeinander abzustimmen. Der Song ist auch sehr schön. ☺️

Danke dir!

Thank you cornholio!!

Unbelievably awesome, @senzenfrenz!! I think you've found your vocal sweet spots in this piece... :-)

Thank you very much Mr. Judge (still one more rhyme)!

Loving this song and it's medieval/seafarers feel. Sophisticated lyrics. Always different from the rest.

Thanks for entering

Thank you for counting me in!

This post has received a 6.69 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @senzenfrenz.

Brilliant. I enjoyed the split screen action.

You are one talented man! @senzenfrenz

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