Open Mic Week 49 - A Song For The Hopeless (Original Song)
Good day guys! This is my very first Steemit Open Mic entry and i want to start by writing a song for the amazing Steemit platform. I hope you'll like it.
I also posted this to my Facebook account for it to somehow encourage my friends to join Steemit and to support our Steemit Team Philippines Facebook Community ran by @sasha.shade, @descterity, and me @olivercuico. Also please join our Discord Channel to personally connect with us.
So here is my entry:
I felt like breaking down, i'm hopeless,
I don't know what to do.
Countless of failures, series of heartbreaks,
And no one cares what i'm going through.
Till the next months passed i'm still so lonely,
So i tried to break-free.
Gave myself a vacation, found a direction,
And i found my passion.
(Chorus)
I know that i am gonna make it through,
Coz i know i'm happy here so i'll do good, ohh...
(Interlude)
(Rap)If you ever feel so lonely, don't you worry
Just be happy, we are here
We can be your good friends.
Join the community,
It can make your dreams reality,
You'll unleash the beast in yourself
And you'll be surprised.
And you will see you're better
Than you'll ever realized.
So what are you waiting for, just sign-up!
Enjoy your life while you are earning.
Let us rock! Let us rock!
In Steemit...
Credits to @luzcypher @pfunk for hosting this great contest and for the openmic image that i used for my thumbnail. Thank you very much!
wow great job brother. You rock. Keep making awesome stuff like this!
Ha ha that's what i'm working on with the past few days, writing songs and practicing singing for the first time. Heck is this Steemit you brought me to. haha
Very creative maiden entry - NICE! Thanks and I look forward to hearing more from you... :-)
Thanks @passion-ground yes i would like to share my music here. I'll be following you too.
wow good job bro..im one of your fan
meep
love this line: "Gave myself a vacation, found a direction,
And i found my passion." :)
you rock bro
Haha too stressful before i came here :-) thanks for your time and support! :-)
yun ohhh. Gogogo brother!
@olivercuico we all have beasts awaiting to be free--- but that beast can dissolve with such singing voice you have☺ 🎶🎸🎤
Thank you for your kind words @lemonchum! ♥
Thanks to my lovely sister @haleyaerith you inspired me hahaha !!!
Really you done good job
great job!!! @olivercuico loved how played the guitar and the content of your song. keep it up!!
followed you to see more..
keep steeming and goodluck..!!
props to: @luzcypher and @pfunk for sponsoring this contest.
yun oh. Nice one. kuya good to see you here. 🤗e
Thank you very much @awchel! I'll be following you too! Thanks for your time. I appreciate it! :-)
Great post @olivercuico.
Great job @olivercuico Lots of feeling in your performance. Love it.
Thanks for sharing
Bucky
Thanks @buckydurddle i saw your fiddle blogs and it is fascinating. i'll be following you
Great melodies, chords and rhythms!
If find this very difficult myself sometimes, but I think you could ideally do with having your voice a bit louder in the mix. Maybe try putting the camera somewhere higher up (if you can), and pointing it more towards your face than the guitar.
Thanks for your time and observation @andybets! i have to step up in many things next time. I'm excited