Hi! I'm amazed by the fact that you decided to write a song in our language....I think it's cool. Great job with the pronunciation, nice voice and piano playing. However I'd like to make 32 suggestions, if I may: the word "sonrie", needs a little more spanish "e" at the end. And also, I don't know if the song is dedicated to a specific person, but just in case it is a woman , then "alone" should be translated "sola". I hope it helps. And keep it up!