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RE: 23 Circus Midgets All in a Row: A Mime Crime - Part 1 (Comedy Open Mic Round #18)
Lol, I love the sense of the ludicrous in this piece of fiction and the sense of the surreal really comes through in the descriptions of the circus midgets, inspired! I look forward to reading more :-)
Thank you so much! I was afraid that it would be hard to work the slapstick into the story and still be funny. Did you find it hard to read with the different Point Of View? I'm not sure if I'll continue with the same POV the entire time or if I'll change to a more tradition POV.
I felt the POV was clear and worked well. It was a strong narration throughout but if you wanted to experiment it could perhaps feel more immediate with a first person point of view but I don't necessarily think this is needed, maybe just if you want to. I enjoyed it from this perspective :-)
First POV is common though. I was going for the unique perspective lol. Plus I just thought it might add a bit of humor reading about someone watching someone do something, lol.