Ode to Ziplock Bags

in #odechallenge7 years ago (edited)

Ode to Ziplock Bags FOR A COMPETITION! I am not completely mad!

I look at thee,
So small and thin,
Your skin
So clear
Your mouth wide open
In hungry anticipation
Of...
Anything.
You are the empty vessel
I crave to be,
The unassuming void
That receives...
Everything,
And questions...
Nothing.
How I would love to be you.

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I really like the twist you were able to put on this. It accomplished depth and makes tge reader think. When you can do that with something as mundane as a ziplock bag, you're good. Good luck with the competition.

Ah thank you so much <3 I'm feeling melancholy haha

Thank you xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx I have literally no idea where it came from. My head's full of nonsense. I need a good slap :)

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