You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: Aftermath - Hip Hop/Rap :) Enjoy! 💚
The lyrics and beat are nice. Only thing is you seem "insincere" when you read the lyrics. You have to find a way to draw out emotion so you're rapping sounds more "sincere" and "powerful" because I really like it how it sounds but it sounds like you're sleepy and that turns me off and no doubt turns off other people.
Hope u found this criticism constructive!
Thank you for the advice my fellow Steemer, I appreciate it, I tried to stay linear because a little movement in my head makes distortion in sound because it was recorded on headset microphone, I will try to bring more emotion without distortion of my voice, maybe I find a way to cut out the distortion, thank you again for the criticism! :) I would love to link you my other rap session, but dsound has trouble with 7 days older music... at least for me :/