I recorded a rap! Its only a short one but I hope you like it!

in #music7 years ago (edited)

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Hey Guys,

Here is a little track I recorded, It's not very long and I'm not very good with production quality, I'm working on it and trying to build my confidence as I go

Lyrics


Music Communicative Media,
Fuels mass hysteria

They peddle panic
fear spreads into defenceless minds
no time taken to take in
whats the essence of the time

how many more years
without knowledge of history
on the shoulders of giants,
vague memories of how we got here

talk little say much,
small conversation,
rhyme for the sake of pattern
dive in blind
model pool lambourghinis
in mansion driveways rented

talk about the rap-game
nah man forget it
its all part of a much larger focus
fractalized mines perceive
less goes unnoticed

employed to pay bills sets fire to time
blazes away to quick to stop and wonder

nothing is truly mine
what do you believe?
reality, what you perceive...

Please leave your comments below, if you know anyone that might enjoy it share it please xD

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loved it. It sounds amazing!!! I also do covers, play violin and do videos on youtube as well. We have to support the music industry on steemit, that's why I upvoted you :D

Thanks @jeanramos I really appreciate that! ^_^

I also just saw some of your stuff man, your very talented, awesome blog

thanks for your feedback

a little unclear to understand, but you gotta start somewhere. Following you for more.

hey bro I just put up the lyrics, I'm still trying to find my style and get a little clearer, Thanks for dropping in and leaving me a nice comment xD

Thanks for the lyrics, looking forward for more.

That's really good @sols! Great lyrics mate and a very nice flow. :)

thanks tonyr mate really appreciate it :)

I like it! It is very poorly mixed, and there isn't much emotion in your voice while rapping, but, and I say this with 100% honesty, the flow is very good! The lyrics are definitely very deep and the writing skill is there! Keep it up and find your voice :) If you have some time, I have a few short raps I recorded too. Here's one: https://soundcloud.com/luka_korba/yyy

hey bro, thanks for the feedback I appreciate the encouraging words,

I don't have any mix skills man, my recording setup is pretty weak too, going into my laptop mic, I need to work on production quality definitely, I try not to let it stop me or i'll never get to share anything xD I dont think I'll be able to get that pro quality for atleast a while longer

I checked out your track bro, seems you got the pro quality down pat xD

No problem! and just do what you can to get better and make the most of what you have :) I still use iPhone recordings to record my raps to this day hahaha :p

nice post ,,, you have good blog , Good luck. Comrade

thanks bro :)

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