Closed Space (Original Song) + Lyrics + A video which I record it today !
About 2 weeks ago I produced a kind of dark song , and then I started to write something meaningful on it and recording my vocal on it , it's a song about a dark life in a dark world and the repeats and repetitive cycle in people life and a person who stuck in that situation I hope you like it :
Song Title : Closed Space
Location is a room in my Parents home and I used a Canon Camera for this video , All the works done by myself (camera edits and ... ) :
Lyrics :
I feel like I'm living like a bug
moving around only when it's dark
I feel like I'm lost in the world
inside the circles of society
I feel like I am under control
don't wanna live here anymore
Don't take my dreams away
Just let me think It's real
Don't take my dreams away
The only thing I have in here
I feel like I'm living like a dog
moving around Only when it's dark
I feel like I got stuck in a box
behind the walls of countries
I feel like I am under control
don't wanna live here anymore
Don't take my dreams away
Just let me think It's real
Don't take my dreams away
The only thing I have in here
Lyrics by : @Davidfar (Davood Faramarzi)
Wow !!!
That is awesome. Really strong lyrics and melody. I am really surprised that you did all this on a canon camera. Amazing !!!
Keep the music alive.
Peace bro !!!
Thank you so much my friend , I had much Ideas for the video , I wanted to Record some scenes in nature and some places between trees and adding some fog effect on it and making it a little dark also recording a video in some destroyed places , but this version of video was a simple version of it , I recorded it with a photography camera with 12Megapixel and I did zooms in the Movie Studio Software , but later I will look for a better video for it and my problem is that I am alone and nobody help me for recording video out there . but I will find a way for it. thank you so much for kind idea about my work , best wishes for you my friend :)
You have a great voice @davidafar and this is certainly one majestic presentation for your piece !! The video is real nice....prefect indeed !! following you mate ))
@gomeravibz Really thanks , You are so kind , I will try to do my bests , but sometimes it's hard in a situation that I am right now , for recording and also Video , I am really happy that you enjoyed of my work . I followed you to mate :)
Life is a situation which is not easy for most as I am sure you know @davidfar ! So stay focused and make what you feel you need to make nonetheless and do stay motivated ! I hope really to see more of this great quality work being posted by you soon here on Steemit )
thank you my friend @gomeravibz , you are right. :) , sometimes life make us weak but we have to stay strong.
Just beautiful Davood! And I learned something new about you, you are a piano player :) Awesome! Love your melody and singing too.
Thank you so much Lyndsay for listening and thanks for your kindness . I am glad that you liked it. :) , but I am not a physical piano player , but I do it in software LOL , but notes are all from my brain or the way that piano play.
Ah I see, well, still an impressive composition :) xo
WOW!! LOOK AT YOU BRO...AMAZING!! I WANT TO WRITE A VERSE TOO!! GREAT WORK BRO. I HOPE YOU WILL LIKE THIS BEAT WHEN IT DONE.
@afrikanprince Thank you so much my friend , you are great , I wanna hear your work tomorrow , It's a pleasure to meet you bro . ;)
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really nice song.basically melody and lyrics are very nice and touch my heart .
keep it up .
Thank you Nur ur rahman , it's your kindness :)
It was good. But short. The only word I stumbled on was society. If the word was said faster at 0:21
That was during the first play. Then I played it again while I was writing this comment to get the timeline, and it sounded better the second time around.
So if that's the only weirdness that stuck out at me, the rest of it was A+ including the 0:21 mark too now that I've heard it twice.
So a job well done. You have talent!
Thank you so much Intelliguy , you are right , I did a delay on it , but in singing sometimes I do these pauses and sometimes singing fast , even in my own native language , a little delay for the slow tempo to fit on the drums, I am really glad that you enjoyed listening to it , and thanks for A+ , really appreciate for your kindness. :)
I love love love love this!
Only thing I can think about what is NOT good is that its way toooo short! :D
Thank you so much , It's great to hear your kind words , yes you are right but sometimes I just do things fast LOL