You are such a great narrator that even if I try to find fault in your story that is impossible. In fact, you have converted your story in a way that finding faults or giving suggestions would be like an impossible task for me. I wish you the best for this contest.
Thank you very much for your comment my dear @dove11, thank you very much, for the love and appreciation of my work.
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I didn't find any comments beyond acknowledging the goodness of the story.
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