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RE: "Calling All MCs and Singers of Earth!!!!" ... I wanna jam with you!! [MC Challenge]
Real chill laid back flow, and again, staying away from the everyday predictable cliche bars. Keep up the craft of lyricism and definitely continue to have fun with it bro. You are improving every time you utilize the pen and voice out your bars. You fit well on this beat, real catchy
Thanks! What do you mean "cliche bars"
You're welcome
I mean bars that everyone uses.
Bars that are predictable, overused, easily foreseen, nothing new, very uncreative, unoriginal, boring, lacking in quality/effort/thoughtfulness
Example.
I am such a boss, see the way I floss
Every time I ball, I make it rain, pay the cost
Never make a loss, rims are lip gloss
Shining like my lady, Hating fakies get lost!
Lol whack rhymes bro just whackkkkkk
Had to write those cliche bars for you so you get the point
Or gun violent hateful bars those can also be cliche.
Lol! did you get the toke an O like i live in japan. no way that's cliche
Yeah I heard that bar, it was creative bro
I listen to a lot of lyrical bars, not too many go over my head these days, they have to be really abstract or unclear for me to not get them, or I just never came across the reference, e.g. a movie, story, historical moment etc...
That bar of yours was refreshing and not cliche.
Nice to find another lyrical person. I've been at parties and someone would tell me to rap(almost everybody in my town knows i rap) and when i was done spitting......some people,mainly females, have this look on their face like i was speaking in another language! lol! I noticed your a judge on open mic, can i rap on that?
Yes you can rap on the open mic. And that is definitely a story I can relate to. Lol We gotta keep Hip Hop alive and well.
thanks and that's great, where can i do this? could you give me a link please?
You're welcome. Check @luzcypher's profile. He just posted week 53, we have been doing it for a whole year, here is the link
https://steemit.com/openmic/@luzcypher/steemit-open-mic-week-53-record-your-performance-and-win-steem-sponsored-by-pfunk-and-luzcypher
and here is the song I wrote which inspired the open mic contest
https://steemit.com/music/@papa-pepper/verbal-d-s-the-official-steemit-song-featuring-edgarstudio-and-papa-pepper-music-video