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RE: The arc between

in #love7 years ago

This certainly is a blank verse, your rhythms seems to be within the lines, however I see a little bit of rhymes in your right and tenth line.

I feel the images they were trying to paint, it's like a sound of a lullaby, howbeit, you found the connection from heart to heart which means the poem ended on a sweet note.

Amazing one here brother, this is beautiful

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Glad you could feel it @josediccus, I really should include the recordings to make the cadence more clear! And rhymes often creep out in towards the latter part of my writing, perhaps because that's when I get most into the repetitive flow of the words... Stay awesome my friend

Yes well it will tend to give the poem another artistic sound that tends to really restructure the poem,
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