ADDICTED
the withdrawals are killing me
like a drug that I feind for for weeks
the lack of your presence brings me right to my knees
I'll trace the lines of your face in my mind
and I'll crave for your taste all the time
and the warmth of your lips upon mine
makes me shiver and shake,
you're implausibly sublime.
And in truth, if i had to choose
between you on my lips
and the sun in the sky,
I'd choose you every time.
Stay up, hold that smile,
Stay with me for a while
Tease and entice my desire
Because your eyes sparkle just like the stars in the sky
a yen i cant deny
and your smile pulls me in,
makes the sun appear dim
and in love I surely sink
Then I'm lost in the bliss
mystified by your kiss
You are everything I miss
and I'll dream of the pleasures of lying beside you
but I'll wake up alone
so I'll write you a poem and a cute little billet-doux
and I'll hope you're alone.
Here's a video of the poem in song form taken on a shitty laptop a couple years ago, if you're interested. LOL
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Well expressed :) The allure of such an addiction can in itself be addicting.
Thank you!(: and so true! I can say the moment the "missing you" part was over, he was among the most vile creatures I'd ever met. He was never alone -.- but at least I got some decent writings out of it. haha
This is certainly the silver lining of a writer :) From great suffering comes great art as they say.
Right?! I can't write for shit without it. LOL
Very good voice :)
Thank you so much!!! ((:
I resteem it! :)
Thank you!!! It's very much appreciated <3
What a sweet and soft piece :)
Thankyou! <3 (: I like singing it along with a green sleeves style melody it's so much prettier when it's sung.
I like your voice it has a nice smooth smokey quality :)
Smokey... I like that haha thank you so much (: Hopefully I'll figure out how to use Dsound so I can post some better quality songs. Web cams are awful.
you log in with your steemit name and posting key which you find in your wallet then you upload a mp3 . I have some of mine up there too ...
Thank you, I'll check it out tomorrow! I'm excited to hear your music style (: