(Horror story)

The story resembles a few years ago in the town of El Tigre, Venezuela, a woman spent a few hours at the house of friends who were especially fond of how kind and attentive they were. I had known them for a long time and was in that phase where you want to spend a lot of time with new friends. Usually the hours were passed so fast that the woman sometimes stayed to have dinner with them, after a phone call to her house to inform them that they had invited her and that they should wait for her a while later. Those days were of authentic relax, enjoyment and a lot of friendship.
One day during the week, in the company of those friends, he looked at his watch and said that he was going to leave for a moment to pick up his daughter from the train but that he would return to spend some time with them. He took his car and left for the train station.
Her daughter, whose name was Ahsley, had arrived only three minutes earlier and when she saw that there was no one to pick her up, it occurred to her to ask a friend she saw at the station to take her home. The cars had to cross and the mother came to the station. Why did he wait for the next train? does not know even the mother herself. He could have either gone back to his friends' house or to his own house to verify that his daughter had missed the train, but instead he stayed at the station, inside his own car ... waiting.
And he waited so long that when the next train arrived and saw that the daughter did not get off of it, he started the car and left, but LOOKED THE CLOCK and decided that tonight he would go straight home. Tomorrow he would enjoy his friends again.
at home, mother and daughter were found. The mother confessed to her daughter that if she had not stayed with her on the train or, even more so, if she had not waited for the next train, she would probably spend that night at home with such an interesting marriage. He did not say angry, tomorrow could see them again.The next day the daughter, her sister and the father of both took the car to go to the capital to work. Just as they left, the phone the mother picked up rang and she did not let them go. "She was the sister of Ashley's mother, she says she's worried because they do not pick up the phone, stop by to see if something has happened and then call me to tell her what's wrong." So, they left their house and went to the house of the couple. The father parked the car, the daughter came down from it and saw the fence ENTREABIERTA. Inside were the cars and it seemed that everything was fine. When they arrived in Valencia, they called the mother to say that it looked like they were about to leave because the door was already open, but they had not called. A little later the woman again received a nervous telephone call from the sister who did not know anything. Please, "he asked." Go and see what happens. This marriage had to have gone to pick up the lady from the telephone to the hospital, where she had been admitted for a few days, that same morning and showed no sign of life.
The woman (Ahsley's mother) took her own car and went to her friends' house. When he arrived, he also saw the half-open gate and the cars inside the particular plot. He entered calling them by his first name (which I will ignore here out of respect) and came to the door of the house. That door was also open and while calling them out loud he kept going ... to the kitchen.There was no one. Then he turned his head and his eyes saw something they almost refused to believe. On the other side, in the matrimonial room, two bodies lay slaughtered. He, tied with ropes and the head cut apparently with an ax; she, tied and with a handkerchief in her mouth, seemed to have been particularly angry with the woman. The woman shouted until she was hoarse "call the police" and so she left the house crying and asking for help. When the police arrived, one of the officers who entered had to go out to vomit. After the investigation, a very important thing was said to Ahsley's mother. "Those who murdered the couple did not want witnesses, having spent that night having dinner with them today would not be alive."
Let's reflect:

Yes Ahsley. he would have waited for his mother in the station, this one, after leaving her daughter in her home, had returned to her friends' house because she had plenty of time.
If the mother had gone home to check if her daughter was at home, being so close to her friends, she would have gone to dinner with them.
If the mother had not stayed to wait for the next train-so that it would be late-she would have gone back to see her friends.
According to the police investigation that happened in the same night, the locks were not forced, those who entered knew the couple, and A.'s mother would be dead.
I hope you like it still need to modify some things and improve the plot a bit.
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