Untalented: Passionate Soul
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Jimoh (@g-mor ) is the eldest of his siblings,
He is the only son among three
Being the first of his parents
He serves behind each five fingers
For his stubborn behavior
He Receives memorable cane each day,
And repeat the equal act
Yet receives another cane
But later to retreat in his childish way.
Slowly his harmless trait
and disappeared gradually,
With bitter and sour agony;
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That controlling cane footed him
Beyond the bound of a child.
His annoying infantile days has long gone,
The climate of his mind has grown
From a common state to a matured star.
His adventure twist with some failures
But he crave for name and fame.
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Nothing worries him
As long as he has an air to breathe
Shelter to dwell
And path to walk
along with the cycle of life.
He love his responsibilities
Tiresome he in no way possess
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From sunrise to dim light
he remembers death
And its subjects
That visits everyone.
As a great devotee
of bible study
That makes him recall
of uncertain icy death.
He does the daily toil
Like a duck
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He by no means keeps his work
Undone like a Broken Home.
His sincerity is well known
Like a sailor,
He was in no way born with a silver spoon
But oars thru problems
He didn't go to the best school
But graduated with second class
On the raft of compassion
Despite icebergs of his peers
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On his roaming path
he found steemit from
a close friend since then
his life was never the same
which pious acts in him
Sprout every day
On with virtuous deeds
he became so fortunate to meet new and bright minded people ( Uncle Terry : @surpassingoogle, @sweetsssj, @nanzo-scoop, @stellabelle, @kencode, @sponge-bob, @ericvancewalton, @vcelier
e.t.c)
which put sprinkles in his heart.
This mapped a new purpose
without delinquency.
Yet he lives with a passionate soul
For the uncertain years to come while steeming.
Thank You Very Much For Your Time!!
This was awesome. You reminded me of myself in so many ways.
Like you, the cane was used on me one, too many times. I was flogged reasonably and unreasonably too.
Truth is that, flogging doesn't really change anyone. It's you that have to make the decision.
I've even seen a child that got beaten mercilessly everyday but refused to change.
It's our choices that matter and not the compulsions.
I think I should write my own untalented soon.
You so are right, but in one way or the other i feel if i was just pampered and not deciplined, i would have gotten lost by mixing up with bad gangs and making wrong choices in life, I think flogging has it upsides while fitting it with good counselling.
Nicely and neatly done
Wow, this is wonderful, you described yourself so well. I hail you sir.
First born🙌
Great just like a poem i love it
Ur passion is supersonic.
Beautiful
Thank you ma
Very nice post. Your Poetry is very realistic.
Am glad you like it
Nice to know a little about you. :) The first pic is really great - cool how the clouds are in the arms and all. #theunmentionables
Thanks
I experienced most of this too
It's good how you learned your ways the right time
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