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Took a look at your work, may I offer some advice?

Any feedback is very welcome and appreciated.

Look into some editing software to help polish up your grammar. I like Hemingway. Also, added value. You need to do more than just comment on the platform, teach something new.

Thank you I'll look into Hemingway and make note of that. :-) I appreciate the feedback.

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