"love passing by" Thought I should share this wonderful piece

in #introduceyourself7 years ago

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When the crimson rose has faded
And our day at last is done;
In the forest dark and shaded
Blows the tempest, dims the sun.
When the night holds us together
Shall forgiveness mend the past
Will despair bring sunny weather
And heal our hearts at last?

If we hide within the shadows
Will you stay here close to me;
Will we walk forgotten meadows
Or sail a foreign sea?
In vain the hour must reap
What we gathered in the sun;
And love's harvest now will weep
For the battle never won.

Within the world's disgrace
In the hour of Nevermore;
Will there be another race
To a far-off fabled shore?
We promised love tomorrow
We preen with pride today
Now pride and love will borrow
The tears of yesterday.

Our pride we now confess it
Is a sin that couldn't last;
Our passion if we kiss it
Is like a dream now passed.
While fragrance scents the garden
And the misty moon rides high;
The wind whispers a pardon
When love goes passing by.

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welcome to the platform Great poetryKeep it up

Amazing post and great poetry i really liked it @vandezy.. if you upvote my posts i will upvote you always :) thnx :D

Thanks @minfenis, why not, upvoted already

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@vandezy, This is an astonishingly well-written poem ... written by Elizabeth Wesley. If you're going to showcase other poet's poems, that's fine ... but you need to give them proper attribution.

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