Please take this as constructive criticism and nothing more. I recommend putting breaks in your texts, and making it aesthetically pleasing to the eye. Block text like this, is generally undesirable to the eye, and in some cases, even strains the eyes, which is why I was unable to complete reading it. It literally hurts for my eyes. Nonetheless, welcome to Steemit! I hope you have a prosperous experience here.
Will try in the future im not the best at it and being my first I def see what your saying thanks for the heads up
Absolutely! I want to see you prosper on here! Best wishes, and feel free to ask questions if you ever run into any hurdles! @futuremind